Thanks all for the input. I am moved.
Terence, I totally understood your comment. I got a chuckle
Paddy, very much appreciate the critique and the encouragement. Very kind.
H20nly, thank you also for listening and commenting.
I am going to focus on this one for a while. It will be a great way to dig deeper into Live and learn more about the program. I have just hit my summer holidays and so can book some time for myself. I will start tomorrow with vocals again and see what I can come up with.
As far as EQ goes, I had not put any in the signal chain. I think I understand correctly what I would be trying to achieve with highlighting the frequencies of the individual parts but I did not think that it would be needed with the 3 essential parts. I dropped the Piano EQ 1 & 2 presets from the EQ8 Instrument Audio effects in Lives library on to the piano track this afternoon and briefly listened but could not locate much if any of a difference with the sound. I will revisit that again tomorrow.
My own opinion was that I thought the vocals were too loud, or the piano was too weak. Singing wise I can definitely chip away and correct pitch. I also did not like some of the pace of the way I sung the words, almost a bit sticky. Piano wise its pretty bland. I would like to change it up a bit without making it a feature or highlight. There are a couple of places where the sustain pedal release was too abrupt. Bass wise... probably in the same camp as the keys, needs a tad more variety without drawing attention. This demo though was just on 4 hours work ( 6 takes on vocals, 3 takes on bass and 1 take on keys with some editing of the bum notes)... so I am very happy that it served its purpose and that you could see some potential. I might just have to dust off some of the other old songs and give them a go.
Oh, my monitors are Logitech Z4 gaming speakers with a sub. The reason for the confusion was that my old Techniques headphones and the monitors gave me the same basic result. What I heard in the cans was what I got in the monitors. They also sound great with my favorite tunes. The vocals on this tune through the BD 990 headphones vs the monitors are dramatically different. It was a curve ball I was not expecting. I have to readjust what my references are I think. I am pretty sure I can budget in monitors in the next financial year

. Until then, we shall carry on. I would love it if you could check in again when you notice as I work on this and update it.
Cheers. Greg.
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