Uplifting Progressive trance track

[the girl next door]

Here is my latest track. The girl next door - Grand old strings and bells
It's "Uplifting Progressive trance"
Can you please listen and let me know your thoughts?
It sounds good in the car and in the studio, but on my works PC with cheap earphones sounds rubbish (No Drum or Bass) .

http://soundcloud.com/the-girl-next-doo ... -and-bells

[Hazamataza]

it was great background music, suited my online affairs perfectly, but it didnt make me jump out of my seat. no real climax or breakdown. all similar.

[Rave]

Musically too simple. Needs developing

[the girl next door]

Thanks guys..

[amigo]

I'm not into trance but I always listen to the music posted on this forum regardless of the genre.
I might not post about it but I do listen to it.

Anyway...

There is definitley the basis of a good track there and you have all of the trance elements in it.
It follows the same trusted formula that you hear in every ance track so maybe a different approach to the arrangement might make it more interesting and appealing.

Thanks for sharing.