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https://soundcloud.com/simon-waters/wavediver Here's my latest song. I'm very slow at writing lyrics and very shy to sing what I've written so I tend to make instrumental stuff. I don't know many musicians so would love to get some feedback from people, please comment if you can think of something c...

I really like your song. I'm no expert but I would cut out more of the bass frequencies to give it a brighter tone, bring the guitar forward and personally I would add another element such as a pad, strings or organ to the chorus to fill it out more.

I'm very impressed with your sound design. Lots of original noises and decently rhythmic too.

I've been away from song writing for ages and just this year got back into it. I decided to start writing a song every month and this is December's effort. I would love to hear some feedback if anyone likes it.

https://soundcloud.com/simon-waters/cracker

I like your track. Nice progression, sounds and melodies. The only thing I would say is that the fourth chord in the sequence is a little unclear sometimes, it seems like you're moving to 2 different chords at the same time and it doesn't work for me.

Heyup - good work there. The subtle reverb gives it a clear and punchy feel. If I was gonna be picky I'd say that the piano playing is dominated by crotchet and quavers notes which gives it a slightly mechanical feel... try runs of triplets and semiquavers to give feel.

2p please.

Simon

Hi here's my latest tunes as made last year. All on http://www.myspace.com/simonwaters.

Made in a combination of record/reason and ableton 6.

I would like to here what people think.

Thanks,

Simon

Like the title of your third track!

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Great Abuyer, A++

+1

Dig it.
Love the bassline.
Beats sound a "little out of the box".

Overall still good.

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