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>Thanks. I need to work on it a lot. People in the comments are right, that Kick sound is just unbearable. I have already changed many things and worked on the sound itself. I'll update here as soon as it is more hearale.

just a little up
Anyone for a comment ?

Hi there,

A little track I worked on 4 hours so far. Please let me know what you think about it!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dsnZ0h-tLbY

Thx for reply ;) I agree about the snare, I realized that this morning while listening with headphones. I'll correct this, and intensify a little the bassline, make it more 'round' also. Also, a female vocalist is planned, a romanian girl that has a very soft and cute voice. I recorded the guitar wi...

lol ok

Hey people, I have been working during 3 hours on a trip hop song that i'd like to improve. I have a friend of mine that would sing on this one, she has a very nice voice so that could be interesting. It's kind of WIP so... Any comment / critics is welcome! have a nice day. The whisteling at 2:05 is...

it certainly sounds good but you may need to work on the structure itself try to make a kind of break with something going up before going back to all sounds. Try some more varation on your lead sound, and where's the bass at the beginiing?

sounds good anyway

Here's an update to it. Strong edit, worked on the sounds etc but still need a LOT of work

Any comments?

http://www.blumaise.org/Ventouse%20-%20 ... 20EDIT.mp3

yes I agree this sound is not really good, this was the next thing to fix. And yes it's a very soft sound for the moment, but I have planned to make a kind of rythmic break after this little intro.

Hey, I have been doing this stuff lately and need some advice about the sound. I have not worked on the construction itself for the moment so what you have here is a simple melody and construction. http://www.myspace.com/djventouse Track called Draft 02 I'd like some opinion about the sound itself, ...

It's good I think. I'm usually not a fan of IDM, but this track is not too deconstructed. Great stuff

I agree with pulsoc, unless that's the effect you really wanted. Maybe try to spot more where you add compression or saturation, and yes the phaser on the general sound just looks weird to me

Maybe you could try to have a more synthetic or electronic drumset. HAving such acoustic sounds in a quite deconstructed environment does not match in my humble opinion. Goog luck!

ah ok well i'd be glad to hear to the full version. And people ripping are just plain lamers with no creativity and no soul.

It sounds good to me I think. Quite deep / progressive.
It's quite short, have you planned to make it longer? Any lead synth planned also?