Would love to get some feedback - 3 recent tracks
Would love to get some feedback - 3 recent tracks
I’ve got 3 recent tracks I’d really appreciate getting some feedback on if you have a few minutes. All tracks were written and mixed in Live 5. Try 1 at least and move on from there if you’re interested. I’m afraid I’m terribly out of touch with genres and sub genres, so please bear with me as I try and give a brief description of each.
The Second Time
Ambient intro gives way to a chilled sort of track.
Nest
Actually much the same formula as track 1. Long ambient intro, beats and a bit of a theme follow. Features lots of noisy, buzzy synth patches. In fact, there’s pretty much a constant buzz throughout the track, but then look at the title.
Black Foulie
Done as a remix of a fellow’s track at kvr (mckenic). I used 2 of his synth loops and seriously mangled them, brought the tempo down to 90bpm and added my own drums, bass and 5 new synths. I think it’s got sort of a dark/trippy/ethnic feel.
Hmmm, ok, I guess I’m kind of a down tempo guy, lately anyhow.
All tracks are 128 bit mp3.
Thanks for your time!
The Second Time
Ambient intro gives way to a chilled sort of track.
Nest
Actually much the same formula as track 1. Long ambient intro, beats and a bit of a theme follow. Features lots of noisy, buzzy synth patches. In fact, there’s pretty much a constant buzz throughout the track, but then look at the title.
Black Foulie
Done as a remix of a fellow’s track at kvr (mckenic). I used 2 of his synth loops and seriously mangled them, brought the tempo down to 90bpm and added my own drums, bass and 5 new synths. I think it’s got sort of a dark/trippy/ethnic feel.
Hmmm, ok, I guess I’m kind of a down tempo guy, lately anyhow.
All tracks are 128 bit mp3.
Thanks for your time!
Last edited by polyslax on Fri Feb 10, 2006 3:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Feedback as I listen - so I don't have any time to think about it....
1. The Second Time: Like the intro with the guitarish sounds, and love the fuzzy pad in the background. It's now gone one for about 1:30 and I want something else to happen, or at least get a massage, as I feel like I'm in a massage parlor (and I don't mean the kind you find in some dingy Shanghai joint where the masseuse will love-you-longtime). Ok, not there's some stabbing noises. It's now 3 minutes and there's some cool mods with sitars. Nice beat kicks in...ABOUT TIME! List the verb on the hat and snare - I likes it wet. I feel the kick could be thicker and deeper - sounds like the low end is absent. It can still be ambient but full...no need for thumping basses. I really like the string plucking sounds in this song. Aah, there's a nice kick at 4:50. Ok, so overall, I'd say that if you cut the intro by about 1:30 and then get to the more interesting beats sooner, it's a pretty good song. Just my opinion - and it's not like I don't have patience for long songs (sit through 10 minute Orbital song and you'll see what I mean).
2. Nest - Love the atmospheric stuff. You're very good at soundscapes. Very nice interesting stuff coming in and out at 1 minute. Great beats coming in later in the song. I really like this song, a lot more than the first. It's got "trip out while listening to me" written all over it. Again, like the first song though, I wish you didn't wait till the very end to bring in the heavier beats, although I suppose that's your point.
3. Mckenic: nice beats right from the start. Crisp and sharp. Like that growling deep bassline. This song is kind of sinister...perfect for Haloween
Love the sounds you come up with at 4 minutes. Love the percussive sound at the end too. This song rocks.
Overall, very nice job!
1. The Second Time: Like the intro with the guitarish sounds, and love the fuzzy pad in the background. It's now gone one for about 1:30 and I want something else to happen, or at least get a massage, as I feel like I'm in a massage parlor (and I don't mean the kind you find in some dingy Shanghai joint where the masseuse will love-you-longtime). Ok, not there's some stabbing noises. It's now 3 minutes and there's some cool mods with sitars. Nice beat kicks in...ABOUT TIME! List the verb on the hat and snare - I likes it wet. I feel the kick could be thicker and deeper - sounds like the low end is absent. It can still be ambient but full...no need for thumping basses. I really like the string plucking sounds in this song. Aah, there's a nice kick at 4:50. Ok, so overall, I'd say that if you cut the intro by about 1:30 and then get to the more interesting beats sooner, it's a pretty good song. Just my opinion - and it's not like I don't have patience for long songs (sit through 10 minute Orbital song and you'll see what I mean).
2. Nest - Love the atmospheric stuff. You're very good at soundscapes. Very nice interesting stuff coming in and out at 1 minute. Great beats coming in later in the song. I really like this song, a lot more than the first. It's got "trip out while listening to me" written all over it. Again, like the first song though, I wish you didn't wait till the very end to bring in the heavier beats, although I suppose that's your point.
3. Mckenic: nice beats right from the start. Crisp and sharp. Like that growling deep bassline. This song is kind of sinister...perfect for Haloween
Love the sounds you come up with at 4 minutes. Love the percussive sound at the end too. This song rocks.
Overall, very nice job!
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first two tracks same opinion as nebulae....it seems you don't really know yet if your going ambient or downtempo, make a choice, either will be good.
I like your sounds, you got a talent for biosphere kinda spheres (which I lIke)
last track, i really like the beat as it is...maybe in my opinion it could do with a more minimalist melody structure...
all in all; thumbs up mate!
I like your sounds, you got a talent for biosphere kinda spheres (which I lIke)
last track, i really like the beat as it is...maybe in my opinion it could do with a more minimalist melody structure...
all in all; thumbs up mate!
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Overall... great use of layers and contrast , the best setting for this music would perhaps be the road, driving at night.
-don't make a person wait for minutes to get drum beats!
-reverb/fx on drums makes them less punchy, but that may be alright for an ambient work such as this
-i think these ideas could be compressed into a shorter track
post some more work!
THX,
Jason D
-don't make a person wait for minutes to get drum beats!
-reverb/fx on drums makes them less punchy, but that may be alright for an ambient work such as this
-i think these ideas could be compressed into a shorter track
post some more work!
THX,
Jason D
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- forum with articles on mixing
Thanks for listening and for your comments and opinions!
I guess I’ll try and stick more to one format/genre, although I personally like the combination I can see it being a turn-off for fans of one or the other. And yes, I definitely see some opportunities to shorten the tracks up a bit.
@Machinate – yeah, although I didn’t set out to write a BOC track, that’s definitely what it reminded me of too! Cheers!
I guess I’ll try and stick more to one format/genre, although I personally like the combination I can see it being a turn-off for fans of one or the other. And yes, I definitely see some opportunities to shorten the tracks up a bit.
@Machinate – yeah, although I didn’t set out to write a BOC track, that’s definitely what it reminded me of too! Cheers!