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 Post subject: Darker Electronic - "something's near"
PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2017 12:11 am 

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https://soundcloud.com/autopilot-183299 ... hings-near

as i'm getting more comfortable with ableton i'm also starting to feel better about my songwriting. this track is my furthest branch out into an electronic sound as i keep experimenting to find a focused direction in my writing. the mix came out different than i expected but the dark mood and emotion i wanted are all there. any listens, feedback and general help would be great to have. thanks AF


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 Post subject: Re: Darker Electronic - "something's near"
PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2017 6:57 pm 

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Some of the lead work sounds a little disjointed, but that might be an advantage here. Its got a progressive rock sound without the guitars as it seems to ebb and flow. The drums are programmed well and sound great. Something feels amiss in the mixing or mastering though but I cant put my finger on it. But yeah, lots of good ideas and keep at it!!

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 Post subject: Re: Darker Electronic - "something's near"
PostPosted: Tue Mar 21, 2017 7:29 pm 

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thanks for the feedback yet again downfader! i was toying with having some sounds kinda isolated/out of time, and it seemed to work in some places and others not so much.
hopefully I learn to improve my mixes soon.


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