First Track - Please give me feedback and help

[Dripping Cheese]

Moin together,

I uploaded my first song and I'm happy to share it with you. I started producing 2.5 years ago and it was a long and rocky road until then. I have no idea which direction I'm going, but I want to produce EDM.

https://soundcloud.com/user-73143412/ta ... -28-152252

I appreciate feedback and thanks for the help!

[Tarekith]

Best way to get feedback is to give feedback other users too!

[JazzTheDJ]

Hey, I had a listen. Good job! I miss some low frequencies on the drop and I feel like the kicks and other instruments are "too MIDI". Maybe you can add some layers to the basses and change the kick with a more effective one. Hope this can help.

Bye

[User6million]

Sounds good, I like it and followed you, too!

I'd put a bit more bass on the kick, it seemed rather hollow. Edit: Like the kick on your track "Back and Forth", that had a little more thump.

I really liked the subdued vocals after 1:00, it would be cool to hear them fully between 2:00 and 2:30, but that's just my humble opinion.

Great job, though!!

[Dripping Cheese]

Hey, I had a listen. Good job! I miss some low frequencies on the drop and I feel like the kicks and other instruments are "too MIDI". Maybe you can add some layers to the basses and change the kick with a more effective one. Hope this can help.

Bye

Thanks for the feedback, it helps a lot. I will pay attention to it in the next song. I would also like to use real instruments more in the future, so that more "humanity" is added.

Thank you:-)

[Dripping Cheese]

Sounds good, I like it and followed you, too!

I'd put a bit more bass on the kick, it seemed rather hollow. Edit: Like the kick on your track "Back and Forth", that had a little more thump.

I really liked the subdued vocals after 1:00, it would be cool to hear them fully between 2:00 and 2:30, but that's just my humble opinion.

Great job, though!!

Hey thank you for the feedback.

I am much happier with the second track!

I still have problems with the arrangement and telling a story, but hopefully that will come.

I'm glad you like it.

See you soon

[Witty_Low]

It sounds pretty good dude! Everyone has their preference with mixing and mastering, so always go with what sounds good to your ears. Good job!

[Dripping Cheese]

It sounds pretty good dude! Everyone has their preference with mixing and mastering, so always go with what sounds good to your ears. Good job!

Thank you very much
I will continue and bring joy to the world!