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Dark Days

Post by twisted-space » Fri Jan 16, 2009 2:56 pm

New track up on soundcloud, opinions/comments very welcome.

http://soundcloud.com/bejay/dark-days

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Post by abort » Fri Jan 16, 2009 9:25 pm

This is beautiful! I love the synth lines that never give up, and that bass.

Is this one done? I could see you putting in some more atmospheric textures being pushed into this large but enclosed space, swirling around in this moment like it was depicting some distant memory.

I had an image of yellow light left and right, horizontally being faded into a pitcher ..faded memory, maybe a tragedy.

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Post by twisted-space » Sat Jan 17, 2009 2:32 pm

Thanks Abort, I'm glad you like it.
I'm never sure that anything is "done", but I'm also aware that things can be overdone if you see what I mean.
Please anyone chime in, what do you think? Is it done or should I work on it some more?

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Post by Spackled Bat » Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:32 pm

I liked this too. I could go either way on its "doneness".

On one hand, I listened to it twice and both times enjoyed it. It's a nice ambient track and certainly works as is.
I could see adding more layers or even using it as an intro to a more beat oriented track but in the end if you think it's done then it's done.
I agree with you about things being overdone. Sometimes less is more.
Thanks for sharing.

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Post by twisted-space » Tue Jan 20, 2009 3:33 pm

Thanks, I like the idea of using it as an intro to something else, I'll have a play and see what I can come up with.
I think I'll call it done, opinions still very sought/welcome though. :D

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Post by tan111 » Tue Jan 20, 2009 5:05 pm

Interesting idea

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Post by twisted-space » Tue Jan 20, 2009 8:07 pm

tan111 wrote:Interesting idea
Which idea?

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