She's like a little bird.

[Rinsemeister]

This is a bump! I've uploaded a couple more tracks, yay!

I really don't have a clue as to what is acceptable these days so
any comments and criticism will be taken in a mature and intelligent fashion.
Unless you flame the f#*k out of me. Then I will cry and throw my toys out of my pram!

http://soundcloud.com/mr-zed/bird-2

http://soundcloud.com/mr-zed/eureka

Cheers ladies and gentlemen.

Z

[danzel]

theft! plagiarism!
only joking.. its nice i like it, the vocal sounds like it is made for the track.
more small changes to the synths throughout would probs improve it in my opinion.

[Rinsemeister]

Thanx for the input.

I think the mastering is the problem.

I've just downloaded IZOTOPE 4 and chucked one of the presets
on master outs..............BIG difference!

It'll take a while to master it (pun intended) but I reckon
it's worth it.

I'll probably get round to re-mastering by the end of the week and re-upload.

Cheers.

Mr.Zed

[contakt321]

I really like the synth sound and pattern on this.
You did an excellent job with the vocals too.

I feel like for such a long track, one thing that would take the song over the top is some sort of drastic change in here past the midway point.

Change in percussion, maybe heavy drums at the outro
Chord change

Great track man!

[djfm]

This is really nice mate. Vocal really fits in there
would love a copy when you master it if thats cool
good job

[amigo]

Very nice.
I especially like Eureka.

Thanks for sharing.