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sam0909
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Perhaps a Demo

Post by sam0909 » Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:03 pm

Working on many different tunes for a while, been looking at these forums for a while but never posted anything.

some feedback would be appreciated on any songs :o

http://soundcloud.com/underground-allowance

www.myspace.com/undergroundallowance

also add me on either of those! :mrgreen:
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Re: Perhaps a Demo

Post by Jarvisimon » Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:00 pm

Gear Up - Well put together, taking a while to build up and once you do you introduce a pulsing raspy kind of bass which doesn't quite work. Too slow attack? All that pulsing compression is a bit too much a part of this track and it doesn't do anything other than pulse on the beat. I reckon the pulsing could be more rhythmic. Also the arpeggio on top of it all is mixed quite low and could be more prominent.

Alright but that pulsing compression is a bit pedestrian.

Electric Ballroom and we're back to pulsing compression again. I know it's part of the style but it's not the only production trick you should be playing around with. Alright but not too greatly different from Gear Up.

Out of Soul. Sounds to me like some more pulsing compression, yep. Thought so.

Not my cup of tea, not just the style of music but the basic rhythm and sounds. Fine for what it is but would like to hear more people breaking out of the mould.

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Re: Perhaps a Demo

Post by sam0909 » Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:34 pm

cheers for replying mate, i'll have to do some chopping and changing :)
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Re: Perhaps a Demo

Post by andrew_ » Wed Dec 09, 2009 12:54 pm

Yo, 'Pass the Salt' is nice and ambient, I was feeling it, but then checked out a few more and they are super hype! Sick electro sound you have going.

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