Forever Young rmx eperiment and my own beat on ableton live

[natty]

Unleashing beats from my hundreds of lyricless tunes. Please Comment so I can see where I'm at.http://soundcloud.com/i-nate

[soultwist]

that is dooope. I liked it!
I would have some sort of intro though.

[jharling]

I agree on the intro. Maybe try just using the piano line from the original, and then drop in at where you started your song here. The glitchy noise that plays throughout i am not a fan of. But do no be discouraged as i think you have a good foundation here. I listed to your other song "Here I go" which i think is much better. Try to flesh that one out into at least 3 minutes and try to come up with a nice ending and i think you will have a solid song.

-Jack