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the girl next door
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New Track after your helpful comments. Thanks

Post by the girl next door » Sat Jul 24, 2010 12:01 pm

Alot of work has gone into this track after your comments
So here it is.
It's "Uplifting Progressive trance"
Can you please listen and let me know your thoughts?

The girl next door - Grand old strings and bells

http://soundcloud.com/the-girl-next-doo ... -and-bells

the girl next door
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Re: New Track after your helpful comments. Thanks

Post by the girl next door » Sat Jul 24, 2010 6:26 pm

Updated. I have shortened the start alittle. taken off 16 drums.

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Re: New Track after your helpful comments. Thanks

Post by Sibanger » Sun Jul 25, 2010 2:39 am

Production sounds pretty sweet.

The stings get pretty 'tired', maybe too repetitious imo.

Good start. Maybe work on arrangement a bit. Needs to go somewhere....

Just my 2 cents.

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conker
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Re: New Track after your helpful comments. Thanks

Post by conker » Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:41 pm

I agree with sibanger the strings are powerfull and sound sweet but I feel after a few measures you should change the notes. My dad who is around 50 started dancing when he heard this track. : )

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