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Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 7:23 am
by Freedombeats
http://soundcloud.com/freedombeats/ruptured-skys

One of my productions in Ableton 8

What do you think?
Freedom.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:14 am
by Bionecteur
fantastic tune...wow...thanks for sharing.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:39 pm
by Freedombeats
Bionecteur wrote:fantastic tune...wow...thanks for sharing.
Thanks, and no problem.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:26 pm
by AceLuby
Nice tune, a little slow for my taste personally, but nice little downtempo song. Only thing I might change is the drums, they sound a little canned.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 5:05 pm
by Freedombeats
AceLuby wrote:Nice tune, a little slow for my taste personally, but nice little downtempo song. Only thing I might change is the drums, they sound a little canned.
Nice one. What do you mean by canned?

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:13 pm
by AceLuby
Freedombeats wrote:
AceLuby wrote:Nice tune, a little slow for my taste personally, but nice little downtempo song. Only thing I might change is the drums, they sound a little canned.
Nice one. What do you mean by canned?
A little lifeless for me the first time through. I think it had more to do w/ the fact that the drums don't really change throughout the song. Maybe something different around the 3 minute mark would help?

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 7:58 pm
by evileye
very nice track
i appreciate the download

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:37 am
by FORMAT
Good work; nice sparse minimal arrangement & groove.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 6:22 pm
by Nephew
Well done mate, just oozes emotion and character.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Thu Aug 26, 2010 12:26 pm
by plantaginate
i quite like it,
agree a-bit with the non-changyness of it,
but i can see myself at a time with a few beers or whatever
and wouldnt care due to the lushness of that bass,
cheers,

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:15 pm
by Freedombeats
AceLuby wrote:
Freedombeats wrote:
AceLuby wrote:Nice tune, a little slow for my taste personally, but nice little downtempo song. Only thing I might change is the drums, they sound a little canned.
Nice one. What do you mean by canned?
A little lifeless for me the first time through. I think it had more to do w/ the fact that the drums don't really change throughout the song. Maybe something different around the 3 minute mark would help?
Ah right I get you, but I actually spent a lot of time making them sound more realistic by not giving them a gridded sound. But I understand that the rhythm itself doesn't change to much. Thanks for the feedback man

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:56 pm
by docprosper
really nice heavy bass sound, and thanks for the DL! This has a moody DJ Shadow-esqe sound to it; makes me want to curl up and watch "Dark Days" again. Props.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Fri Aug 27, 2010 5:32 pm
by Beattender
Love it mate. Good work. The rest of your tracks kick arse too!

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:31 pm
by ChrisMack99
Filthy!

I really like the vocals, and dark down tempo songs are my shit.

Good work man.

If I could make one suggestion I would say to have one section in this song where it picks up a bit and gets heavy and nasty...that's my personal taste though it might not be your thing.

Re: Deep/Triphop/Dub tune

Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:07 am
by housemunky
Dark and dirty. And that vocal slices through the mix. Love it.