Critique my latest remix? Free candy and naked girls!! Njoy!

[blue frog beats]

just kidding about the free candy and naked girls. I wish i wasnt.

I did put together a new remix though, this time of the track, "Finally" by kings of tonight.

I would categorize it as bouncy house with some experimentalness.

Anyways here it is:

http://soundcloud.com/myrokrolles/final ... ll-remixxx

Really looking for what i should improve on / what you think i did well so i can keep gettin better

Thanks everyone!

Follow me and i'll follow you, or just post up a link / hit me up and ill be sure to return the favor!

[blue frog beats]

I feel i should mention that this is not some remix of two tracks, no one usually cares to listen to those types of songs

I only used the vocals - everything is mine.

Thanks

[tlennon]

Shyt Myrok! You got me on the candy and naked girls. I like what you did with the track. From 1:30~2:nn, the vox samples are cutting too abruptly like it is missing the verb/delay tails. Find a way to create your own verb/delay tail if the sample does not have it at that point. From 3:10 the vox "You" on every 8th beat is too strong. Nice work as usual dude. Thanks!

[blue frog beats]

yo tlennon good to hear from you again, its been a little while. Thanks for checkin it out man, i totally agree with everything you had to say. I struggled with finding a good delay / reverb for the vox in that middle break, and sort of just gave up. I was really sick of this track by the time i was putting vocals on it, maybe thats why.... It just seems kind of lame now that i re-listen to it. not happy with the track at all. Another failed experiment, but a little bit taken from each one. Thanks again for the listen man, the next one should be better!