Am I any good? Electro - style for your ears to critique!

[blue frog beats]

Do you know good electro music? I would like to know what you guys think of my latest track, which i made over the weekend and i'm looking for some feedback on before i go back and add / change some stuff.

What do you like about it? what dont you like?

feedback is greatly appreciated

here it is

http://soundcloud.com/myrokrolles/gravity

thanks & Enjoy

MC / MR

[blue frog beats]

thanks, glad you liked

anybody with some critiquing that cares to share a way i can improve it, i'm always lookin for feedback

[jharling]

Maybe add a 3rd section. It seems you have an intro, Section A, breakdown/build section, Section A again,then a short outro. Perhaps add a B section and a longer outro. Sound wise i think you doing pretty good on this one. Cant think of anything else at the moment.

Cheers