Chilled out yet upbeat house track

[Jamopi]

Heres a track I made back just a week or so ago I would love some feedback or even just some listens would be nice.

http://soundcloud.com/jamopi/not-watchi ... ever-again

[gjm]

First impression was that it was missing a whole chunk of the bass spectrum and the staticy sound was to upfront or owned to much presence. I think the repetitive nature of the piece could have been offset by a non repetitive melodic type bassish something... how's that for jibberish! Cool to get something made and posted though. Keep em coming.

[Jamopi]

thanks for the honest and insightful feedback gjm im thinking of reworking the song a bit maybe your totally right about the bass spectrum thing