New track, would love some feedback

[Bassruthless]

Hey guys, i just finished putting in a lot of time into a recent track and would love some feedback on it. It's not mastered and i intend on remixing it in an actual studio but i'm pretty happy overall. I realize it's difficult to get some real feedback on this part of the forum but i would appreciate anything you have to say.

Thanks! I owe a lot of what i know to this community.
-Marcus

http://soundcloud.com/automationmusic
track is called "Onward"

[2ach]

Great work. I feel like in some places that snare is all in my face though, like too much for everything else thats going on ya know. Like there was this one soft place then the perc stuff came and the snare was like KAAAAAHHH KAAh KAKAKA. Subtleties, subtleties my friend.

[Bassruthless]

Thanks i really appreciate you taking the time to listen and give me some constructive feedback, that is something I will definitely work on. I think getting the drums to always sound clean in the mix is what i struggle with most in my productions.