Mastering is meh. But that's to be expected.
Hi guys and gals. First time posting a track. All feedback is appreciated. Mixed down on headphones as i do not have any monitors currently. Hope you like. http://m.soundcloud.com/mjavs
Sounds aren't bad. Chord progression is a little bland.
You're lacking a hook.
As soon as I stopped listening, it was gone. No little tune stuck in my head. That's probably the biggest thing you'll to work on.
The whipping must put air in and this stops it exploding.