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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:55 pm 

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Hi guys and gals. First time posting a track. All feedback is appreciated. Mixed down on headphones as i do not have any monitors currently. Hope you like. http://m.soundcloud.com/mjavs


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 Post subject: Re: New Track
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 9:40 pm 

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Mjavs wrote:
Hi guys and gals. First time posting a track. All feedback is appreciated. Mixed down on headphones as i do not have any monitors currently. Hope you like. http://m.soundcloud.com/mjavs


Mastering is meh. But that's to be expected.
Sounds aren't bad. Chord progression is a little bland.
You're lacking a hook.

As soon as I stopped listening, it was gone. No little tune stuck in my head. That's probably the biggest thing you'll to work on.

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 Post subject: Re: New Track
PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2012 11:09 pm 

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Thanks for the feedback


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 Post subject: Re: New Track
PostPosted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 11:09 pm 

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Did you take your sample down? For some reason when I click on your link, the song Mjavs isn't there.

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