Don't You Think It's Time (House)

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terryjohn
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Don't You Think It's Time (House)

Post by terryjohn » Sun Oct 16, 2016 9:16 am

Hello,

Here's my first ever attempt at a House track - using Ableton Live 9, TAL NoiseMaker VST synth and native Live effects/processors:

https://soundcloud.com/actionwithoutact ... k-its-time

I'm trying to get better at making this stuff sound more professional, so any honest + constructive feedback is appreciated :) (e.g. my other half said the kick is too loud/monotonous)

Thanks in advance,

TJ

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Re: Don't You Think It's Time (House)

Post by see the light » Mon Oct 17, 2016 2:25 pm

The kick sounds good but there is little in the way of hi-hats to drive the groove and you're missing the high frequency melodies.

The vocal doesn't really work for me either - keep it up though, love a bit of house music :)
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Re: Don't You Think It's Time (House)

Post by terryjohn » Sat Oct 22, 2016 4:45 pm

see the light wrote:The kick sounds good but there is little in the way of hi-hats to drive the groove and you're missing the high frequency melodies.

The vocal doesn't really work for me either - keep it up though, love a bit of house music :)
All great feedback - thanks for taking the time to listen!

Like your stuff btw. You've obviously been doing this far longer than I have!

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