Feedback on a rock track

[Subba]

Hello Ableton forum. I've been working with Ableton for about 6 months now and am finally starting to feel like I'm getting a better grasp at songwriting. The mix sucks b/c I have yet to save up for monitors but I'm uploading this track for any kind of public feedback and advice you all have for me. Thanks for the help and be as harsh as need be.

https://soundcloud.com/autopilot-183299 ... af/s-X3CFO

[downfader]

Don't be afraid to make the track public. You've got some good groundwork on the beats and the lead, rhythm and bass. It needs vocals of some sort imo. It feels like its just waiting for a vocalist or lyricist to finish it off. The mix is pretty good to be fair. Good work