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 Post subject: The Beauty Of This World
PostPosted: Fri Nov 23, 2018 7:53 pm 

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This is an unique track which I recently made. The structure of the track is unique and it contains elements of different genres. The track contains a digital guitar (from Ableton), bass synthesizer, synth keys and digital drums. The beginning of the track contains these instruments, but later on you also get to hear acoustic guitar and piano loops which were not made by me. The basslines which you hear while those loops are playing were made by me though. And of course the drums were programmed by me too.

Let me know what you think of it.

https://soundcloud.com/delta-bolt/the-b ... this-world


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 Post subject: Re: The Beauty Of This World
PostPosted: Mon Nov 26, 2018 6:08 pm 

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Hi, I would say you could do with work on some of the elements. The structure is to apraut and simple.

Also, the sounds don't seem to match and almost seems like 6 songs in one. Strip it back and work on a core theme and idea. Sorry if that sounds harsh, just my opinion

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 Post subject: Re: The Beauty Of This World
PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2018 11:12 pm 

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wearemindflux wrote:
Hi, I would say you could do with work on some of the elements. The structure is to apraut and simple.

Also, the sounds don't seem to match and almost seems like 6 songs in one. Strip it back and work on a core theme and idea. Sorry if that sounds harsh, just my opinion

Which sounds do not match exactly? I have used many.

I am not going to change the structure, I made it like this on purpose.


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