Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

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walthamstowman
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Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by walthamstowman » Sat Mar 21, 2020 3:09 pm

Hello!

While self-isolating, I thought I'd upload another of my songs.

It's very pop. Only listen if you like pop songs!

I don't consider myself a singer, musician or producer, just a non-performing songwriter, so I hope you like the song itself.

Will be interested in any responses or reactions.

Here's the link:

https://soundcloud.com/user-97129328/li ... n-my-cheek

Stay safe!

David

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by Tone Deft » Tue Jul 21, 2020 6:23 pm

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by walthamstowman » Tue Jul 21, 2020 8:14 pm

Thank you Tone Deft, very kind of you to say so, and to have taken the time to listen.

It would be great if a proper singer/producer wanted to take a crack at this song because I think it has potential but not so many people are interested in this kind of melodic pop these days, I guess.

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by Tone Deft » Tue Jul 21, 2020 8:58 pm

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by walthamstowman » Thu Jul 23, 2020 4:47 pm

Hi TD, I don't have any problem with making it open source (if I knew how to do it!) but I know my vocals aren't good enough, and it really needs a proper singer to have a crack at it. I like the jamming idea though!

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by Tone Deft » Thu Jul 23, 2020 6:14 pm

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by Tone Deft » Thu Jul 23, 2020 8:59 pm

https://soundcloud.com/tone-deft/lipsti ... hamstowman

I re-posted your song with EQ, compression and drums added.
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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by walthamstowman » Fri Jul 24, 2020 12:41 pm

That's really cool TD. Drum patterns are a definite weakness of mine so that was interesting. The rest of the track gets a bit lost in the compression, though, I feel, at least on my speakers.

There's rather more than 3 chords in that song, incidentally, but it needs a male vocal. If it's a song for your wife we're after, I wonder if you'd consider having a look at this one, called 'How Much Love':

https://soundcloud.com/user-97129328/how-much-love

I used some vocal transformation software to try and make myself sound like a woman, but not entirely successfully. :) Do your think your wife would fancy a crack at it?

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by Tone Deft » Fri Jul 24, 2020 4:37 pm

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Re: Lipstick On My Cheek (pop song)

Post by walthamstowman » Mon Jul 27, 2020 9:03 pm

Fair enough 8)

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