my first 2 - songs in live

fabiovc27 · Post by **fabiovc27** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 12:02 am

my first 2 - songs in live.

http://www.fabiovalentino.com/music/el_transformer.html

http://www.fabiovalentino.com/music/car ... grila.html

i would greatly appreciate any feedback, since i'm still learning

thanx.

-fv

HitchHiker · Post by **HitchHiker** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 1:21 pm

I thought both tracks were really good.

The first track's guitar plucks timing seemed a little hit and miss.

The second track's melody reminded me somewhat of the "Merry Christmas Mr Lawrence" theme.

Overall, I enjoyed both.

Hitch.

somejerk · Post by **somejerk** » Tue Nov 21, 2006 5:10 pm

transformer is good, but some of the guitar sounds a little off.

fabiovc27 · Post by **fabiovc27** » Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:31 pm

thanx for the input guys. yeah, some of the guitar on "el transformer" is off. I think I should record the whole guitar part in one shot b/c i don't have any real latency on my setup right now.

anyways, i appreciate the comments.
thanx.

-fv