first song with ableton live-electronika

[amelodic]

first completed track with ableton and Prop Record.leave a comment,this is my first music posting on here so I don't know how things work.I have only been making music on the computer for 2 years,so I am a relative novice,having started from scratch.I bought ableton a few months ago,but have been using it sparingly,having been quite busy.Very impressive so far.thanks
http://soundcloud.com/a_melodic-71/pacinodeniros

[evileye]

Some good elements in there. try and change things up a bit. it gets a little repetitive after a while add some fx,drum fills,breaks layer stuff up use auto filter to take things out slowly
would like to hear it with the changes

[amelodic]

thanks for your reply,i am a bit inexperienced so it will take a while to work out how to make all the changes you suggested! but i will definitely try and figure out how to make my music more spontaneous.thanks

[birde]

I started 2 years ago, too. How do you like Record?