please have a listen.
thanks guys
http://www.emasters.co.uk/userfiles/533/307funk.mp3
I finished one!
wahey! 
It's a nice feeling finally arranging your first complete song isn't it
Very interesting use of sounds here, I especially like the sub-attitude you've got going and the glittery in-tune-percussive fx that pans around
Just needs a little bit of work on the mix, and a chunkier crackin' snare perhaps, a few more layers and textures mid-way through the track and bob's your uncle!
Other than than, good stuff mate!
It's a nice feeling finally arranging your first complete song isn't it
Very interesting use of sounds here, I especially like the sub-attitude you've got going and the glittery in-tune-percussive fx that pans around
Just needs a little bit of work on the mix, and a chunkier crackin' snare perhaps, a few more layers and textures mid-way through the track and bob's your uncle!
Other than than, good stuff mate!