Track I've been working on [trance-ish]

Illumin · Post by **Illumin** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:09 am

here's a track I've been working on. comments/critique of any sorts are welcomed and appreciated!

http://www.virb.com/tsan

doesn't have an official title yet, so its labeled as "unknown #1 (10/01/07)", also under the "in the works" album

thanks!

Broken Chip · Post by **Broken Chip** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:28 am

Your track sounds great. Good overall production and mix. Maybe just play around with some filters a little more through the track for some extra movement. Nice work.

downfader · Post by **downfader** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 3:18 pm

Doesnt do anything for me I'm afraid, but thats coz I'm not into trance so my view would be worthless on it.

Imperfected however, I LOVE!! Absolute genius!

Illumin · Post by **Illumin** » Mon Oct 29, 2007 3:07 am

thanks for the comments!

downfader....thanks for listening to imperfected....lotta emotion into that

Airbase · Post by **Airbase** » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:23 am

I'm not very fond of that rough, sparkly bass. The choice of instruments is nice, even though I find them to be a bit all over the place. A part from that, I like it. The thing is when you build a track around such a short melody with that tech style, you need a beat that stands out a bit. This beat is more suited for a big melody. Hard to explain, hope it helped some anyways.

// Jezper

bleepsnbreaks · Post by **bleepsnbreaks** » Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:14 am

Im not really into this kind of music anymore but I really liked it.
Like the presence in the bassline, and the programming and rythm/fills etc is quite complex... nice man, especially seeing as its kinda off genre for you....