new electro track

robleighton22 · Post by **robleighton22** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:51 am

gotta brand new track i made today. its got more of a hook than most of my other stuff. going for the banging electro. needs work on the vocals samples and drums, and some effects. but im ready for some initial feedback to keep me going. so any comments much appreciated.

www.soundclick.com/littlerob

"synthesise it!"

cheers

Affiliation · Post by **Affiliation** » Thu Feb 28, 2008 11:36 pm

you lost me at 1:30. cool intro. bring back that beat without the fluff. need some more work on that synth lead that seems to be so dead center its out of the mix. make the whole track shorter. cheers. just my 2 cents.

robleighton22 · Post by **robleighton22** » Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:11 am

cheers for the feeback. ive done some adjustments, so give it another listen. less reverb, and added some side-chaining on the bass, plus it sounds a bit sharper (ive noticed that the arpegiated sequence is too quiet/flat, must hav missed that, whoops, will need to update.. but i do intend to re-structure and add a proper hook with the vocals. ill b updating this track a lot within the next few days.

avatarzero · Post by **avatarzero** » Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:25 am

Good funky beat. I also got "lost" a bit. All great elements. I'm not very knowledgeable yet about some of the technical stuff, but Affiliation's post seems to have covered that nicely. In my opinion it just needs editing down a bit.