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[ew5]

hi

just started to learn with ableton a trying to make something listenable.
so i was thinking it would be nice to hear some opinions.

if anybody interested i put the link for download here, but i am afraid it is a bit different cup of cofee than these songs I have heard here.

http://sharegadget.com/521837924

thanks

[amigo]

Hey there, welcome!

I enjoyed the track but honestly nearly turned it off after the first few seconds as I found the intro to be very weak.
This is the part of the track that should catch peoples attention.

The track progressed nicely and your choice of sounds work very well.

Thanks for sharing.

[ew5]

thanks a lot.

it is really good and helpful that you said what you think. well thanks God you're so patient and gave to it chance and listned till end.

[amigo]

I really did enjoy the track and if you decide to change it please let me know.

[Ugov]

I like the song, almost Nine Inch Nails-esque. I have to agree the start is a bit weedy. You should change it.