Hartbreak - Deep House

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superglue
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Hartbreak - Deep House

Post by superglue » Fri May 08, 2009 10:01 am

yo yo yo...

I have re mixed my latest tune. I think it's much better now. What do you think?

All the best...
H

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Re: Hartbreak - Deep House

Post by som » Fri May 08, 2009 3:08 pm

The synth is nice, but the rythm is a little bit too complex - in my opinion.
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Re: Hartbreak - Deep House

Post by superglue » Fri May 08, 2009 6:27 pm

Do you mean the low toms? I think you are right. they sound too similar to the kick. I am working on it at the moment. I have removed them all together now and I think it sounds better but may need something else. Singing I think. Yes.

Thanks for the feedback.

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Re: Hartbreak - Deep House

Post by tlennon » Wed May 13, 2009 1:33 am

I don't know what type of sound you're going for but all of them seem boring and uninteresting, and poorly mixed. Have you compared your songs with any reference material to check levels, panning. compression and eq? With much practice you will get better but start looking and listening to professional mixes and video mixing tutorial online to get you in a better direction. Good luck!

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