made a sweet house tune

lerky · Post by **lerky** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:34 am

nice laid back kind of feel to it, keep it up man it sounds good

Grappadura · Post by **Grappadura** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:38 pm

thx lerky!

chevthewizard · Post by **chevthewizard** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 1:52 pm

Grappadura wrote:thx man, yeah I also played around with white noise and wanted to implement it, just didn´t know where exactly. What would you improve in the bassline? the notes or the tone, or both? And yes, the spacey feel is something to still work on, some more reverb perhaps... also its not mastered yet.

I would be subtle with the white noise fx and stuff, just like add ever so slight build-up's towards where beats kick in / transitions, and let it echo over

bassline, the tone sounds a bit basic, too saw wavey, it's kind of stuck inbetween being electronic and trying to sound like a bass guitar, i would go more in either direction

just imo of course

Grappadura · Post by **Grappadura** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 2:09 pm

chevthewizard wrote: bassline, the tone sounds a bit basic, too saw wavey, it's kind of stuck inbetween being electronic and trying to sound like a bass guitar, i would go more in either direction

just imo of course

well said. yeah I got a friend who plays bass maybe I should ask him.

shai · Post by **shai** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:37 pm

Grappadura wrote:
chevthewizard wrote: bassline, the tone sounds a bit basic, too saw wavey, it's kind of stuck inbetween being electronic and trying to sound like a bass guitar, i would go more in either direction

just imo of course
well said. yeah I got a friend who plays bass maybe I should ask him.

it is sweet indeed, the tune. it does also work as is, but i would lean towards adding other.. or just deeper bass. i guess it's matter of taste, but for me it's just a bit too naive sounding. i guess i miss the mean kontrapunkt

Grappadura · Post by **Grappadura** » Sun Feb 08, 2009 6:25 pm

thx shai!