Please lend me your ears again

[bicarbone]

nice one! there seems to be some clicks in this mix though...

Yeah, it's the panned right wind toy organ. The recording is pretty bad.
I'll try to fix it, but at some point I'll have to decide I'm finished with this track...

Anyway, thanks fish!

[jez3122]

very nice mate.....i love your voice it's got a great tone to it..

keep doing what your doing

[ChiDJ]

Amazing. Clever lyrics, (Big time Bowie). Your voice has a great tone. Excellent choice of instruments especially the mellotron-esque organ. I really like how you effected your vox. I wouldn't change it. I could see this remixed with some dirty synth's to contrast the soft sounds. (maybe that's what you were trying with the"ducky sound"??)

Anyway, Props!

Tod

[bicarbone]

Thanks heaps every one!

This is now my final version (as edited in my previous post):

http://www.martinrewki.ch/A_Brave_Cosmonaut.mp3

[subunit23]

I think it sound better than the first version, somehow more coherent and solid. THe vaccum cleaner sound is now very pleasant. Well done, that's a really good work.
One last thing though : the fill at 1min35 sounds a bit thin. But that's really minor.
Overall your song is really really good

[bicarbone]

One last thing though : the fill at 1min35 sounds a bit thin. But that's really minor.

Oh yeah, well let's say it's ground control to Minor Tom then.
(sorry, I shouldn't be making puns when it's not my language)