like the track ..but still needs some work....
first the positives : like the stutter female voc...very goa style..
Really enjoyable folk break...and massive second part after it..
the not so good part ->.the rolling drum thingy that is there with the matrix vocal and the female vox....i personally would not put this there,it kinda collides with the rest of the song (and takes away the attention from the more interesting parts),
.the song takes off (in a good way) when you take those rolling drums thingies out...so i would just leave it out and try to fill that middle band with a different sound (more flowing ..like a pad or so...
and also...it's too short ...you could extent the part after the folk break , its beautiful and could be a bit or multiple bits longer.
the kick and bass could be a bit punchier...but hey i'm listening to an mp3 so might sound stronger as a wav....look a bit into compression (also not my strongest point).
love the composition thoo........can i make an ambient remix of it ?
greenthings
Waldo.