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made a sweet house tune

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:20 pm
by Grappadura
I think this is my best song so far, I´m quite excited about this one.
its called schöne töne and its available through my soundcloud handle:

http://www.soundcloud.com/grappadura

thx for listening. any comments greatly appreciated.

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:39 pm
by contakt321
Hey man, I really like this one.

I like the way the keys come in - it changes the entire vibe of the track that the bass sets.

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:41 pm
by Grappadura
thx contakt!

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:52 pm
by SubFunk
FAT! a real hip swinger :)

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:53 pm
by Grappadura
thx my man!

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 10:54 pm
by Grappadura
thx again! is this a track anybody of you would buy?

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 11:53 pm
by SubFunk
Grappadura wrote:thx again! is this a track anybody of you would buy?
Positive, it's solid dancefloor stuff.

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 9:38 am
by Grappadura
cool thx bro!

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:38 pm
by chevthewizard
I really like when the wurly comes in, sounds very nice, really cool chilled groove to it. I'll be honest the first 2:23 bored me a bit, and the bassline sound could be improved. i also think the track could do with a few more filtered delays on one of the parts, to give it a bit more spaced out feel. Or maybe just some subtle white noise effects over transitions that gradually fade away, that kind of thing. Just some ideas of course, it's very nice as is and really enjoyed it once the keys came in.

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 1:44 pm
by Grappadura
chevthewizard wrote:I really like when the wurly comes in, sounds very nice, really cool chilled groove to it. I'll be honest the first 2:23 bored me a bit, and the bassline sound could be improved. i also think the track could do with a few more filtered delays on one of the parts, to give it a bit more spaced out feel. Or maybe just some subtle white noise effects over transitions that gradually fade away, that kind of thing. Just some ideas of course, it's very nice as is and really enjoyed it once the keys came in.
thx man, yeah I also played around with white noise and wanted to implement it, just didn´t know where exactly. What would you improve in the bassline? the notes or the tone, or both? And yes, the spacey feel is something to still work on, some more reverb perhaps... also its not mastered yet.

Re: made a sweet house tune

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 6:25 pm
by DJ VAKIS
Grappadura wrote:I think this is my best song so far, I´m quite excited about this one.
its called schöne töne and its available through my soundcloud handle:

http://www.soundcloud.com/grappadura

thx for listening. any comments greatly appreciated.
Very nice!
But you sould post it at link your music post.
Here is just for general discusions

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:46 pm
by madhattared
hey dude,

i like computer music the best, nice work!

Re: made a sweet house tune

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:50 pm
by Grappadura
DJ VAKIS wrote:
Grappadura wrote:I think this is my best song so far, I´m quite excited about this one.
its called schöne töne and its available through my soundcloud handle:

http://www.soundcloud.com/grappadura

thx for listening. any comments greatly appreciated.
Very nice!
But you sould post it at link your music post.
Here is just for general discusions
Not if I want quick feedback ;) . There is so much OT stuff in the general forum anyway, and I´m not tricking anybody into clicking on the thread. So tecnically, a song belongs into the music section, but if it doesn´t harm anyone, why not take the liberty of overcoming a tecnical rule.

Generally speaking, I would like to see a player here that randomly plays the forum members tunes like on kvr, maybe with some rating system attached to it or something.

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:51 pm
by Grappadura
madhattared wrote:hey dude,

i like computer music the best, nice work!
thx man!

Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2009 11:34 am
by lerky
nice laid back kind of feel to it, keep it up man it sounds good