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An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 6:54 pm
by Joxe
Hi all,

I have just uploaded an excerpt of a song of mine.

http://www.vulomedia.com/audio/audiofil ... ptSong.mp3

I know that it is not finished yet however I would like to have your honest opinion on the excerpt.
Feel free to criticize.

Thank you so much in advance.
Kind regards,

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 1:21 am
by OlafOverDJ
What kind of Instruments did u use ?

Sounds interesting ...

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Wed Aug 19, 2009 5:35 pm
by Joxe
Any other opinions?

@OlafOverDJ : I used in this song Sytrus from Image Line.

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:11 am
by darkslide
Hey man, sounds nice and smooth. I like the panning cymbals and the mini burst beat. You're showing some good attention to detail, you could even vary the patterns on the bursts a bit for extra detail.. ? My only criticism would be: if this excerpt part goes on for a long time I could see it getting too repetitive (without variations). But it is only an excerpt so I can't really judge that...

Nice work so far. Nice piano tone too.

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2009 11:42 am
by Joxe
Any other opinions?

Thank you in advance.

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 4:55 pm
by miccharlys
The sound is very awesome....very good work done indeed

Re: An excerpt of my song.

Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:06 pm
by Joxe
Thanks for all your opinions.
I have now removed the excerpt and am working on improving it and adding other parts.

Thank you for having heleped me :wink: .