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2nd song ive posted
Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 6:58 pm
by jharling
This is the 2nd track i have posted, i think its better than my first. Let me know anything that could be changed/improved
http://soundcloud.com/jharling/morningminimal
Re: 2nd song ive posted
Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:20 am
by michael4u
I have no good knowledge about the track but seriously speaking i really like it.
It makes me remember my old days when we bunked from our college and used to watch movie online at the home of one of friend.
Re: 2nd song ive posted
Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:27 pm
by 8O
Seems to be a bit over the place in terms of direction. My favourite section was from 1:58 to around 2:40 - loved that bassline and just that section could be built up into a great track. As it is, to me it sounds like it's trying too many things all in one track and never letting any single idea develop to a fuller potential. Hope it doesn't sound to harsh, but I think there are plenty of ideas there, just need more focus...