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Hello all, finished on the first version of a new tech-house track today, please tell me what you think!

http://soundcloud.com/sanderbongertman/ ... iginal-mix

Regards,

Sander

second version is online now at the same link!

1:00 - I like this, nice mix, tight in the low end.

that percussive synth might be a bit loud.

2:10 - don't care for that snare.

3:00 - nice buildup going on here

nice outro.

good tune!

thanks for checking it out!

I might have to take another look at the percussive synth indeed, sounds a bit loud. What exactly do you mean with don't care for the snare hehe?

the snare just sounds thin, too wimpy to stand up to the phatness of the other sounds around it. or maybe that's how you like it.

definitely keep in mind that I try to write something, anything to give feedback, sometimes the feedback is more valid, sometimes it's wrong.

it's a good track, no doubt.

Ah, now I see what you mean well any feedback is much appreciated so thanks a lot! Do you have tracks as well on soundcloud or something? cheers

just one. <insert usual list of excuses.> mostly I just can't write songs, I just like to make loops and jam out, no focus, blah, blah.

http://soundcloud.com/tracks/search?q[fulltext]=eephlat


glad to help, it's really interesting to hear other peoples' work, nice way to get to know posters as well.

Well you should make a full version of that track, sound awesome mate!