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Tlennon: "I had to "kill the noise". LITERALLY! Experimentation gone awry."
SlimC: "A little painful to listen to"
sunaivod: "I'd call it drone core"
kev herb: "i nearly soiled myself when i heard this "

malutki: "it f'ing rocks!"

nathannn: "it starts to sound like you are just dragging the branches around in synplant"

Scratch Master Crabs: "Might well be the worst thing I've ever heard."





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I don't know what to make of it either. A little into it, it got very disturbing and I had to "kill the noise". LITERALLY! Experimentation gone awry. Thanks for the share.

Hmmm. I liked the initial bit, but once the aggressive samples came in I found it...antagonistic, to say the least. Was that the idea?
A little painful to listen to, Mate!

I'd call it drone-core

tlennon wrote:I don't know what to make of it either. A little into it, it got very disturbing and I had to "kill the noise". LITERALLY! Experimentation gone awry. Thanks for the share.

i like the texture . but im just turning the knob araound and guess i should just try and make some music out of it.

SlimC wrote:Hmmm. I liked the initial bit, but once the aggressive samples came in I found it...antagonistic, to say the least. Was that the idea?
A little painful to listen to, Mate!

i was trying to make minimal.

sunaivod wrote:I'd call it drone-core

im going with drone-step.

i nearly soiled myself when i heard this

er started off ok. kick needs more welly. lead sound far too high in the mix during most of the track.

Rave wrote:er started off ok. kick needs more welly. lead sound far too high in the mix during most of the track.

yeh its well too loud. i halfed the volume and it still sounds in your face. Im going to rerecord it. iv got troube getting the beat omphier.

There are some good sounds but it needs more rhythmic variety beneath the lead and for the lead to be a little more musical. You should work some more on it, there is something here.

Rave wrote:kick needs more welly. lead sound far too high in the mix during most of the track.

this.


apart from that it f'ing rocks!
just be sure to make that kick 4 -> floor.

And maybe pull one or two of the usual minimal arrangement devices.

the very last part is only a measure or two, that could be more


my humble 2ct of weird taste

i would continue working on it like others said.
its definitely different. i like new sounds. but around 45 seconds in it starts to sound like you are just dragging the branches around in synplant.
i do think your on to something good though.

Sounds a bit like f*** buttons when it gets into it. I liked lots of it.

its coming back. a new version posted soon.

edit bump

I enjoyed it...great stuff, pretty industrial but from 3.30 on it had a really dark house vibe about it..

Id still say the kick is letting it down a bit...Id layer another kick sample in their and just EQ it for the boom/sub frequencies..as it stands its too sharp imho


some great kick samples here if you're interested

http://www.wavealchemy.co.uk/free-samples