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http://soundcloud.com/sevgiolam/synaesthetic

criticism always appreciated !

Some nice sounds in there, I like the vocals and the subtle feel, but I think the arrangement is a little dry. Granted, I know its not supposed to be some club tune, but I think some small variation would provoke a little more interest in the listener.

thank you, and yea a lot of what i make lacks that im still learnin how to make my music more fluid. this beat was also heavily amphetamine influenced haha

This is a nice start. Definitely look into maybe layering up that kick or something to give it more presence, I think it would be great with a long decay filling out the bottom end. The transition @ 1:20 is rather abrupt, I would work on that. I would also say maybe alter the beat up a little more. As mentioned a little more variation to keep it interesting, but definitely something worth continuing! Nice share.

Sevgiolam wrote: this beat was also heavily amphetamine influenced haha

pretty chill track

Nice subdued music, relaxed!

I think there could be more activity, more development.

Hey John. Can't really add or subtract from what was already commented. I usually comment that the song is too long but in your case it's too short. Thanks for sharing.

thanks all for the feedback

here's a couple a recently finished with the same kinda sound

http://soundcloud.com/sevgiolam/tamajaq-daydream

http://soundcloud.com/sevgiolam/cretaceous-campfire