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How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 5:38 pm
by marconk
Produced some music.
I've been experimenting with different styles. Would like to hear what you think. I mostly remix but I made one original piece- *insert wasteman name here*
http://penguincrossing.bandcamp.com/
Thanks.

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:33 pm
by the_antagonist
how do i work this?

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:44 pm
by tan111
YOu need to spend some more time I suppose because I didn`t get It :(

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:25 pm
by martin808
I really like all the remixes. good production.

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 4:59 am
by leedsquietman
your original track was great for about 2 minutes, seriously nice kick, nice delayed techno chords etc, but it could use a little extra variety. I'm not a fan of the side stick which comes in briefly.

This is maybe a little too minimal for my tastes, but some type of lead melody sound and/or some claps or snare, hats etc or percussion as the track builds would make it more enjoyable for me to listen to beyond that initial 2 minute period.

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 7:39 am
by som
Good sounds, but the layout and overall structure is too simple for a complete song. But a good start...

Re: How I spent my school holidays.

Posted: Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:37 pm
by andrew_
I agree with the above, overall the production is a bit too minimal for my tastes...