need feedback on this industrial-ish track
Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:59 am
http://soundcloud.com/penguinoid/without-a-scratch
I'm laying out basic sketches of a song here, but it needs either something more in the middle before the pad sound at 2:30 comes in, or after the point where the song currently ends, but I'm still a bit of a novice in regards to song structuring/production, and I'm wondering if anyone has any opinions on ways to expand or improve on it aside from the obvious lack of mixing that has been applied at this stage.
I'm laying out basic sketches of a song here, but it needs either something more in the middle before the pad sound at 2:30 comes in, or after the point where the song currently ends, but I'm still a bit of a novice in regards to song structuring/production, and I'm wondering if anyone has any opinions on ways to expand or improve on it aside from the obvious lack of mixing that has been applied at this stage.