My second Dubstep track! Just A Phase (Original Mix)

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Neils
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Re: My second Dubstep track! Just A Phase (Original Mix)

Post by Neils » Mon Aug 23, 2010 3:01 pm

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Re: My second Dubstep track! Just A Phase (Original Mix)

Post by AceLuby » Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:07 pm

I didn't like the beginning, that phone ringing got pretty annoying by the end.
0:40 it really picks up, I like it there.
1:11 annoying telephone again and the grind sound isn't doing it for me.
1:38 it gets good again
Not a huge fan of the end

Basically I would look to change up the first 40 seconds and 1:11 - 1:38, that and make it a little longer. Not a bad start.
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