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Groovin so hard I almost lost my shoes.... Myrok Rolles
Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:34 pm
by blue frog beats
Yea, i'm not really sure what that means either. But i'm an amateur song builder, and I would love it if someone could give me some feedback on this track i put together. Anything from the vocals to the beat to the drums to the overall vibe, I just want to know what people think. Thanks to everyone who listens or comments, be sure to post up a link or comment to one of your songs so I can do the favor in return! Here it is:
Made Men - Is it You - Myrok Rolles Rolling Remix
http://soundcloud.com/myrokrolles/is-it-you
Re: Groovin so hard I almost lost my shoes.... Myrok Rolles
Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:04 pm
by Dharma Bum
I think it's pretty good how it is
I'm pretty impressed with how you got your vocals sounding!
I think you should put a bigger bass line behind it
And maybe mix the vocals a little more sparsely
Re: Groovin so hard I almost lost my shoes.... Myrok Rolles
Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:24 pm
by blue frog beats
Oh hey thanks man, I'm glad you found it listen-able at the least. The version you listened to was actually not what i intended to post. I forgot to save my ableton file before extracting as audio, so you got one that wasn't complete. I uploaded the completed song here:
http://soundcloud.com/myrokrolles/iz-it-you
thanks again everyone who listens
Re: Groovin so hard I almost lost my shoes.... Myrok Rolles
Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:44 am
by Dharma Bum
http://forum.ableton.com/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=149795
Here's a link to one of my songs
It's actually my first so I'd love any comments
Everything was popping a lot more on that one!