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hello

this is my first song http://soundcloud.com/nazara/nazara-3

Can you tell me what you think when you here this song? What can I change so it's sounds mutch better?

Thanks !
Nazara

Nazara wrote:hello

this is my first song http://soundcloud.com/nazara/nazara-3

Can you tell me what you think when you here this song? What can I change so it's sounds mutch better?

Thanks !
Nazara

and I know allready the outro is crap

The kick needs more oomph and you need to add more elements, otherwise it has potential. Keep on practicing