Guitar Track needs comments :-)

[guitFX]

Hi there,

i would love to hear what you think of this track. I use Ableton Live Lite Line 6 Edition. So as you see, its an guitar track.
Bass and guitar played by myself. The drums come a little bit adjusted from Drumcore Free Edition.

I think its very short. But maybe it has some potential. Comment please.

Thank you.

http://soundcloud.com/whattson/its-time-to-live

[holistic]

This one made me think of Dinosaur Jr. I think it needs a bridge or something. Some new harmony, something that happens. But it's a good start.

[UKRuss]

It's a nice idea but clearly still at a basic stage, looking forward to hearing how it progresses.

[guitFX]

Yeah, i think the thing with the bridge is a point. It sounds like some samples appended.