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OK, so admittedly I've only been producing for a couple of months, but my previous track - 2nd track produced to date - really tickled my nether regions when I played it back, however my latest production feels like it's fallen short. I can't pinpoint where I've gone awry but it just doesn't give me the same tingly feeling the previous track did.

If anyone could take the time to have a listen and give me some brutal critique it would be really appreciated - I want to climb over this train wreck and move onwards and upwards with my next composition.

http://soundcloud.com/winnnaz_music/dodging-shadows