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First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:04 pm
by Dripping Cheese
Moin together,
I uploaded my first song and I'm happy to share it with you. I started producing 2.5 years ago and it was a long and rocky road until then. I have no idea which direction I'm going, but I want to produce EDM.
https://soundcloud.com/user-73143412/ta ... -28-152252
I appreciate feedback and thanks for the help!
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2022 2:42 pm
by Tarekith
Best way to get feedback is to give feedback other users too!
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2022 9:00 am
by JazzTheDJ
Hey, I had a listen. Good job! I miss some low frequencies on the drop and I feel like the kicks and other instruments are "too MIDI". Maybe you can add some layers to the basses and change the kick with a more effective one. Hope this can help.
Bye
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Fri Jul 22, 2022 8:34 pm
by User6million
Sounds good, I like it and followed you, too!
I'd put a bit more bass on the kick, it seemed rather hollow. Edit: Like the kick on your track "Back and Forth", that had a little more thump.
I really liked the subdued vocals after 1:00, it would be cool to hear them fully between 2:00 and 2:30, but that's just my humble opinion.
Great job, though!!
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2022 9:43 am
by Dripping Cheese
JazzTheDJ wrote: ↑Fri Jul 15, 2022 9:00 am
Hey, I had a listen. Good job! I miss some low frequencies on the drop and I feel like the kicks and other instruments are "too MIDI". Maybe you can add some layers to the basses and change the kick with a more effective one. Hope this can help.
Bye
Thanks for the feedback, it helps a lot. I will pay attention to it in the next song. I would also like to use real instruments more in the future, so that more "humanity" is added.
Thank you:-)
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2022 9:48 am
by Dripping Cheese
User6million wrote: ↑Fri Jul 22, 2022 8:34 pm
Sounds good, I like it and followed you, too!
I'd put a bit more bass on the kick, it seemed rather hollow. Edit: Like the kick on your track "Back and Forth", that had a little more thump.
I really liked the subdued vocals after 1:00, it would be cool to hear them fully between 2:00 and 2:30, but that's just my humble opinion.
Great job, though!!
Hey thank you for the feedback.
I am much happier with the second track!
I still have problems with the arrangement and telling a story, but hopefully that will come.
I'm glad you like it.
See you soon
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2022 1:23 pm
by Witty_Low
It sounds pretty good dude! Everyone has their preference with mixing and mastering, so always go with what sounds good to your ears. Good job!
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2022 9:20 am
by Dripping Cheese
Witty_Low wrote: ↑Thu Jul 28, 2022 1:23 pm
It sounds pretty good dude! Everyone has their preference with mixing and mastering, so always go with what sounds good to your ears. Good job!
Thank you very much
I will continue and bring joy to the world!
Re: First Track - Please give me feedback and help
Posted: Thu Jun 13, 2024 7:18 pm
by favox
So far soo good. Good job!