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My first completed tune.
Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:22 pm
by mrsteve81
This link here will give you passage to my first complete tune. Please leave feedback even if you think it will make me cry!
http://www.myspace.com/stevengreeneissonice
Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:31 pm
by downfader
No, a chinese burn would make you cry.
Anyway, I digress. Great beats and the bass is cool. The drums progress very nicely too. The weird lead synth could have done with something extra, it just seems too simple to my ears (but then maybe I'm not being subjective enough as I have been mangling sounds this week, lol)
I think you should possibly consider some vocals over this? Just my gut feeling however again.
Yeah nice stuff, well made.

Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:11 am
by mrsteve81
Cheers for the feedback. I know the synth lead needs something. Maybe some dirt.
You cant go wrong with a nice bit of dirt, can you?
Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 10:16 am
by downfader
..exactly, and good for the immune system too.
