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Hi All,

Just polished off another new track and thrown it up on my myspace, would love to get some opinions.

This is another one week-er, still a few tweaks to be done yet, but largely finished.

http://www.myspace.com/davedaviesproductions

thanks for listening!
And as per, if you like it then send me an add request!

Like pulling teeth sometimes getting feedback on here
Anyone had a listen? Got any comments?
I made some good improvements on my last track through comments here.

Ok so I felt sorry after reading your pulling teeth comment. I'll be honest Im not into house. I like IDM,Downtempo, DnB, and ambient to noame a few.

You have good production, sound wise everything is placed well. Your melodies seem a bit repeditive. Maybe try writing longer notes to create more of an atmosphere like you did in your last track on myspace. Sequencing wise, we try and are still trying to have our tracks move people. I think it might help you if you had a clear intro, climax, and ending. You already have captured the energy don't give it away to soon. Make the listener eager to hear your climax and drop it on them hard and dont go back.

hope that helped
good luck

-z
http://www.myspace.com/amantsymphonic

Thanks for the feedback man, some great comments there to think about

Anyone else had a listen?
Any more comments anyone?