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Track I've been working on [trance-ish]
Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:09 am
by Illumin
here's a track I've been working on. comments/critique of any sorts are welcomed and appreciated!
http://www.virb.com/tsan
doesn't have an official title yet, so its labeled as "unknown #1 (10/01/07)", also under the "in the works" album
thanks!
Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:28 am
by Broken Chip
Your track sounds great. Good overall production and mix. Maybe just play around with some filters a little more through the track for some extra movement. Nice work.
Posted: Sun Oct 28, 2007 3:18 pm
by downfader
Doesnt do anything for me I'm afraid, but thats coz I'm not into trance so my view would be worthless on it.
Imperfected however, I LOVE!! Absolute genius!
Posted: Mon Oct 29, 2007 3:07 am
by Illumin
thanks for the comments!
downfader....thanks for listening to imperfected....lotta emotion into that
Posted: Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:23 am
by Airbase
I'm not very fond of that rough, sparkly bass. The choice of instruments is nice, even though I find them to be a bit all over the place. A part from that, I like it. The thing is when you build a track around such a short melody with that tech style, you need a beat that stands out a bit. This beat is more suited for a big melody. Hard to explain, hope it helped some anyways.
// Jezper
Posted: Mon Nov 05, 2007 4:14 am
by bleepsnbreaks
Im not really into this kind of music anymore but I really liked it.
Like the presence in the bassline, and the programming and rythm/fills etc is quite complex... nice man, especially seeing as its kinda off genre for you....